A CBS Insider’s Guide To Acing The Columbia MBA Essays

The Columbia MBA essays ask you to explore your career goals, your leadership style, and your commitment to the CBS community. As a CBS alum, a former AdCom and now an admissions coach, I love seeing how candidates use these essays to showcase not just what they’ve done, but who they are and how they’ll show up at Columbia. 

Let’s walk through each question and how to approach it.

Tips for Columbia MBA Essay 1

Prompt:

Through your resume and recommendation, we have a clear sense of your professional path to date. What are your career goals over the next three to five years and what is your long-term dream job? (500 words)

Our take:

This prompt hasn’t changed from last year, and with good reason – it’s an essential measure of your clarity, direction, and ambition. Columbia is inviting you to paint a clear and compelling picture of your future. 

Start with a short, personal hook – a formative moment, insight, or story that explains what drives your career vision. Then, in a few sentences, provide enough professional context to frame your goals. Think of this as a bridge: it connects where you’ve been to where you’re headed.

Next, outline your post-MBA trajectory, and clearly spell out your short-term (3–5 year) goals. Be as specific as possible about the role, function, and industry you’re targeting. Your long-term dream job can be broader, but it should still be directional and purpose-driven. Columbia is looking for candidates with ambition, clarity, and the potential to have a major impact.

And while Essay 3 gives you space to dive into why Columbia specifically, Essay 1 should still show that your plans are informed. Highlight how a CBS MBA helps launch you forward. The best essays show both vision and preparation while signaling that Columbia is the right launchpad.

Key takeaways for Columbia MBA Essay 1:

• Focus forward. Keep the spotlight on your future goals, not your resume.
• Start strong. Open with a story or insight that grounds your ambitions.
• Be specific. Identify your target post-MBA role, function, and industry.
• Show direction. Let your long-term goal reflect purpose and big-picture impact.
• Connect to CBS. Even without going deep, show how Columbia fits into your plan.

Tips for Columbia MBA Essay 2

Prompt:

Please share a specific example of how you made a team more collaborative, more inclusive or fostered a greater sense of community within an organization. (250 words)

Our take:

This prompt reflects the school’s ongoing focus on collaborative leadership and community engagement. It encourages you to showcase how you bring people together and contribute to a group’s cohesion and strength. The Columbia admissions committee is looking for:

• One specific moment – not a general pattern or role description
• Your individual actions – what you did to shape outcomes
• The results – what changed for the team or group
• Your insight – what you learned about yourself as a leader

This is a behavioral-style prompt that also demands self-awareness. Whether your example involves improving collaboration in a remote team, boosting morale in a tough moment, aligning across departments, or advocating for someone else’s inclusion, be sure your story highlights emotional intelligence and a people-first approach to leadership.

We recommend the STAR framework to stay grounded:
Situation – set the context briefly
Task – what was your responsibility
Action – what you did and how
Result – what happened and what it taught you

Avoid buzzwords and generic claims. Instead, focus on real actions that had real effects – and you could tie your story back to the kind of impact you hope to make at CBS.

Key takeaways for Columbia MBA Essay 2:

• Choose one clear story. Specificity is key – no vague summaries.
• Emphasize action and outcome. Show how you moved the needle.
• Demonstrate emotional intelligence. Highlight inclusion, empathy, or trust-building.
• Reflect. Share what this taught you about your leadership style or values.

Tips for Columbia MBA Essay 3

Prompt:

We believe Columbia Business School is a special place with a collaborative learning environment in which students feel a sense of belonging, agency, and partnership—academically, culturally, and professionally.

How would you co-create your optimal MBA experience at CBS? Please be specific. (250 words)

Our take:

This is Columbia’s version of the “Why Us” essay – with a meaningful shift in tone. Rather than asking what you hope to receive from CBS, this prompt emphasizes what you’ll create. The terms “co-create” and “agency” signal a desire for students who will actively shape their MBA experience and add something distinctive to the community.

The admissions committee wants to know:

• How will you contribute inside and outside the classroom?
• What will you take initiative on – and why?
• How does your past experience and personality align with CBS’s culture?

To stand out, go beyond listing clubs or name-dropping professors. Show that you’ve done your research and are ready to be a builder – someone who will deepen the learning experience for others as much as for yourself. Think about the collaborative nature of CBS: the Cluster system, learning teams, peer mentorship, and NYC as a learning lab.

This is also an invitation to showcase your values. Whether it’s expanding a club’s reach, mentoring underrepresented voices, or bringing a new perspective to class discussions, be specific about the “how.” Demonstrate self-awareness and a track record of showing up in communities you care about.

And while not explicitly stated, don’t forget Columbia’s location. If NYC is a key part of your vision, make room to highlight why being in the heart of business, culture, and innovation enhances your MBA experience.

Key takeaways for Columbia MBA Essay 3:

• Show you’ve done your homework. Be specific about your fit.
• Be proactive. Emphasize ownership, initiative, and your ability to shape outcomes.
• Tie in your values. Align your contributions to what matters most to you – and to CBS.
• Mention NYC’s value-add. It’s not required, but Columbia thrives in part because of New York.

Tips for Columbia’s Optional Essay

Prompt:

If you wish to provide further information or additional context around your application to the Admissions Committee, please upload a brief explanation of any areas of concern in your academic record or personal history. This does not need to be a formal essay. You may submit bullet points. (max 500 words)

This space is truly optional and best used for explaining gaps, weaknesses, or anomalies in your profile. Think of it as a space for context, not content. Don’t try to squeeze in another leadership example or rehash your resume.

Valid reasons to use this essay include a low GPA, a break in employment, or an unusual transcript. If something in your application might raise a question for the reader, address it here directly and concisely. Bullet points are fine. Avoid long-winded explanations or defensive tone – just clarify the issue, take ownership, and highlight any positive steps you’ve taken since.

If you don’t have anything to explain, skip this section. Submitting an unnecessary or unfocused response can do more harm than good.

Key Takeaways for the Optional Essay:

• Use only if needed: Don’t force content if there’s nothing important to explain.
• Keep it short and direct: Bullet points are acceptable – and often preferred.
• Take ownership: Be honest and solution-oriented without making excuses.
• End on a positive note: Emphasize how you’ve moved forward or addressed the issue.

Let’s Get You In

At Fortuna Admissions, we’ve helped hundreds of candidates gain acceptance to Columbia Business School; we understand the nuances of what CBS is looking for. Want a candid, personalized assessment of your chances at CBS? Schedule a free consultation and let’s talk about your next steps.

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Cassandra Pittman is a Senior Expert Coach at Fortuna Admissions and a graduate of Columbia Business School. For more free advice from Fortuna Admissions in partnership with Poets&Quants, check out these videos and articles. For a candid assessment of your chances of admission success at a top MBA program, sign up now for a free consultation.

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