Cindy

Cindy Tokumitsu at Accepted was wonderful in helping me throughout the process, she made a huge difference in articulating my story to the adcom at HBS. I am delighted that I was accepted to HBS; but even if I was not selected, I would still definitely recommend Cindy to any prospective student! I have worked with Accepted before on applications where I was not selected, but I still felt the team was always extremely committed to helping their clients go above and beyond. Comparing my initial essay draft vs the final submission shows how much of a difference Cindy and the team at Accepted had made on my journey!

Cindy was very experienced and pleasant to work with. I had a 100% success rate and got admitted to 2 schools out of the top4 universities in the US for their EMBA programs. Besides continuous editing of my resumes and essays, what I enjoyed most are those brainstorming meetings on the essay topics with Cindy. Cindy is very inspiring and guides me to look at ideas/opinions/experience from an MBA standpoint. I truly believe that my applications would not have been so smoothly without Cindy’s support. I highly recommend her 🙂

I worked with Cindy on a real estate masters application. I had a quick turnaround to get the application submitted, and within a few weeks, Cindy helped me create the perfect essay in order to transition careers. She was extremely timely in all of her rounds of feedback and was patient with me as I explored different recommendations and angles for my essay. It was a pleasure to work with her, and I highly recommend her services. I was accepted to my program.

Cindy was great. Worked with her 4 applications – 3 of which were reach schools. I got accepted in all 3 of my reach schools.

I have nothing but the best words of gratitude for Cindy. Since minute one, she was professional and personable. I had a tight deadline, and she worked with me to meet my goal and finish my application on time. She has an incredible understanding of the whole application process, and every one os her advice was essential. She guided me through my essay writing, gave me ideas, and understood the approach I wanted to convey.
I would highly recommend Cindy to anyone applying to an Executive MBA or any program. She really cares about your needs and understands how important this process is.
I was accepted into a top EMBA program.

It was a real pleasure to start my MBA journey with Cindy, one of the milestone people in my success. From my essays to my interview, she was always supportive, helpful, empathy. Working with Cindy was like working with my mother, as she found the right words to get me up whenever I felt down. Furthermore, I was impressed with how she navigated between my personal information, my goals, and the B-school’s interests to help me produce my awesome essays. For me, Cindy is the right person to lead you toward the B-school you would like to attend.

Working with Cindy is very enjoyable. She revised my drafts of essays effectively and gave me many fantastic suggestions. Her turnaround time is also amazing, I always get her revision within one day. Due to her experience in Asia, she could understand my cultural background and help me point out my uniqueness. I really appreciate Cindy and would recommend her to anyone looking for help with their admissions essays!

Cindy was wonderful to work with in helping me craft my B-school essays from beginning to end. She starts out the process with a brainstorming session, then sends over a detailed outline that makes it easy to write the first draft. From there on, she does a wonderful job taking as many turns of editing as needed to get the essay ready. I would recommend her to anyone looking for help in drafting and editing outstanding essays!

I have enjoyed working with Cindy so far so much I can already tell how worth it this experience will be for me! I had no idea what to write for my personal statement in my application or how to sell myself through it, but Cindy, with all her years experience, has been a great help at getting me started. She is also always quick to answer emails and right on time with calls that are scheduled. I really appreciate working with Cindy and would recommend her to anyone looking for help with their admissions essays!

Cindy is the best application consultant I’ve worked with. My application started very late (1 month before the last deadline). Cindy helped me outline the action items and prioritize the things I need to do. Her work is very punctual and thorough. The conversation between her and I always inspired me. I would never regret to have purchased her 10-hour service at the very beginning. I strongly recommend Cindy for her many years of experience in MBA/EMBA and master’s application consulting and more importantly her inspiring characteristics.

I run my own business and was looking at EMBA programs. I found accepted in an online search as I was beginning the application process and realized I hadn’t written an “essay” or had to apply for anything in years. Cindy took the scaffold that I had started to create with the beginnings of my application and helped me build an app that really showcased my strengths. I was accepted into an Ivy league EMBA program.

Cindy is fantastic. Just like some other people mentioned here, she never tries to impose some pre-defined patterns on your candidacy, but instead helps you position your true self in the best possible way. Cindy is good for both high-level application strategy and nitty gritty details like essay checking. One factor where Cindy clearly stands out from many other consultants is that she really knows the “untold” specifics of top US programs (in my case it was about which schools “like” candidates with above-average experience). And finally I can’t overstate how dedicated Cindy is to her clients. She really cares and she never hesitates to to go that extra mile to help. What can be more precious than that. But, hey, let results speak for themselves: I got 4 admits with 100% scholarship from top-25 programs.

To me, meeting Cindy was like Google’s “ I’m feeling lucky ” click! I am glad to have got acquainted with her. She had been a great mentor and helped me throughout the admission process from A to Z to one of the TOP business schools. Cindy has tremendous experience and knowledge in the consultation field, she is very easy going and flexible, in the sense that she welcomes you as you are and guides you to *BE YOUR BEST* (because that is what matters the most to get selected, unlike other consultants who tend to impose a specific style or guidelines… that doesn’t add any value). If anyone wants to increase the chances of getting accepted to a top school I highly recommend her. Good luck !

I worked with Cindy on editing my essays to both UVA Darden and NYU Stern. She was a great asset in helping me craft these essays. She was able to provide assistance with brainstorming essay topics, suggesting areas where the essay could be strengthened with additional detail or examples, and providing tips on essay flow and grammar. Her insight into what the adcoms at these schools were looking for was very helpful, and provided good peace of mind that I was on the right track. I can happily report that I was accepted to both schools, and Cindy’s help with my essays was a big part of that. I would definitely recommend her to others looking for help with MBA essays.