Harvard | Mr. Big 4 To Healthcare Reformer
GRE 338, GPA 4.0 (1st Class Honours - UK - Deans List)
Harvard | Mr. Billion Dollar Startup
GRE 309, GPA 6.75/10
Duke Fuqua | Mr. IB Back Office To Front Office/Consulting
GMAT 640, GPA 2.8
Cornell Johnson | Mr. Healthcare Corporate Development
GMAT 740, GPA 3.5
Chicago Booth | Mr. Mexican Central Banker
GMAT 730, GPA 95.8/100 (1st in class)
MIT Sloan | Ms. Digital Manufacturing To Tech Innovator
GMAT 720, GPA 3.4
Harvard | Mr. Tech Risk
GMAT 750, GPA 3.6
Chicago Booth | Mr. Whitecoat Businessman
GMAT 740, GPA Equivalent to 3(Wes) and 3.4(scholaro)
Columbia | Mr. Developing Social Enterprises
GMAT 750, GPA 3.75
IU Kelley | Mr. Advertising Guy
GMAT 650, GPA 3.5
Wharton | Ms. Strategy & Marketing Roles
GMAT 750, GPA 9.66/10
Rice Jones | Mr. Tech Firm Product Manager
GRE 320, GPA 2.7
Yale | Mr. Education Management
GMAT 730, GPA 7.797/10
Columbia | Mr. Neptune
GMAT 750, GPA 3.65
Darden | Ms. Education Management
GRE 331, GPA 9.284/10
Columbia | Mr. Confused Consultant
GMAT 710, GPA 3.2
Yale | Mr. Lawyer Turned Consultant
GMAT 730, GPA 3.7
Harvard | Ms. 2+2 Trader
GMAT 770, GPA 3.9
Harvard | Mr Big 4 To IB
GRE 317, GPA 4.04/5.00
Stanford GSB | Ms. Engineer In Finance – Deferred MBA
GRE 332, GPA 3.94
Chicago Booth | Mr. Corporate Development
GMAT 740, GPA 3.2
UCLA Anderson | Mr. Second Chance In The US
GMAT 760, GPA 2.3
Harvard | Ms. Big 4 M&A Manager
GMAT 750, GPA 2:1 (Upper second-class honours, UK)
Harvard | Mr. Harvard 2+2, Chances?
GMAT 740, GPA 3.2
Harvard | Mr. Comeback Kid
GMAT 770, GPA 2.8
Wharton | Ms. Negotiator
GMAT 720, GPA 7.9/10
Harvard | Mr. Marine Pilot
GMAT 750, GPA 3.98

The Questions MBA Applicants Are Getting

Mistake

Mistakes To Avoid In Your MBA Application

In a recent post on her Expartus site, Chioma Isiadinso, a former assistant director of admissions at Harvard Business School, painted a pretty bleak portrait of admissions:

“…every spot is subject to intense competition and there are many more qualified applicants than there are openings at top business schools.”

She was writing about the biggest mistake that she saw applicants make: Not applying to enough schools. However, there are several errors that potential students can make on the actual application that are equally lethal. In a recent column in U.S. News, Stacy Blackman pointed out several of the key errors that she has seen in her two decades as an admissions consultant.

For one, she advises students to follow directions – and that doesn’t just mean word count. “Applicants often become so determined to drive home a particular point, or worse, drift off into a tangent, that they fail to succinctly answer the question,” Blackman warns. “Business schools create their essays with the goal of finding out how you fit their program, and not answering the question immediately indicates poor fit.”

Your word choice and tone are also critical. In particular, Blackman cites “industry jargon” and “Flowery or stuffy language” as major no-no’s. “With hundreds of applications on their desks, the admissions staff has only a few minutes to review each essay. It should be immediately digestible,” she writes. She also advises readers to avoid anything that might potentially alienate decision-makers. “Leave out any mention of religious or political views; avoid the subject of money and how you want to make loads of it after you get your MBA​; and steer clear of overt humor in general, unless you are a comedian by profession,” Blackman notes.

And the same principle applies to how students frame their experiences. “As you come up with those great anecdotes to illustrate your leadership, problem-solving or team-building skills, make sure the examples in your essay don’t include criticizing a co-worker or complaints about your supervisor, even in a subtle way,” Blackman emphasizes. “Always keep the tone positive, or it will end up reflecting poorly on you.”

You can also equate an essay with an attorney’s closing argument – a rational and absorbing narrative that puts your case (i.e. being admitted) into the best light. However, an argument has little potency without a passionate delivery behind it. And that’s a final area where Blackman sees candidates fall short. “Most MBA applicants aren’t professional writers,” she explains, “and sometimes make the mistake of writing essays that are informative, logical, well-organized and, inadvertently, a snooze fest. This is not the time to repeat your resume in prose form. In fact, she cites some recent advice from the University of Texas’ McCombs School of Business as the best measure for success: “Convince us that you are not only capable, but that you are special and that we will be lacking something without your presence.”

For additional nuggets from Blackman, along with Isiadinso’s advice for expanding your school search, click on the links below.

DON’T MISS: A GREAT 100 HOUR MBA APPLICATION

Sources: U.S. News & World Report, Expartus